First edit

This is a summary of what I have done so far. I still need to add the scene where Jordan visits the graveyard, and when Leah is visiting the doctors initially before she finds out her diagnosis. I think I might remove the shots which I initially planned which show a plate smashing on the ground, this is because I think this may confuse the audience and it might be a unnecessary part of the storyline.  I have had a discussion with my media teacher, and we are both debating whether to keep the opening sequence clip of the argument between the couple. This is because she thought it was quite confusing and that there was a lot going on, she also suggested I simplify the narrative by removing this clip as it might make the storyline clearer by doing so. Some shots (living room, in the bedroom) in this draft are a bit too dark, so I may need to re-shoot some of these shots. However, I am happy with how my video is looking so far. I may add different edits between the clips to show the difference between the flashbacks and what is happening in the present. I could also add a sepia filter on top of the flashbacks to distinguish between the past and the present.