Audience feedback for first draft

I posted a link to my music video via Facebook where many members of my target audience would see it. I received many positive comments from my Facebook friends. However, they did point out some areas for improvement. The scene where Leah tells Jordan her news isn't completely clear and it could be seen that she is pregnant rather than suffering from a terminal illness. Therefore, when re-shooting some scenes of the video I could make this more clear by, for example, pausing the music and showing dialogue between the couple. Some of my Facebook friends also commented that they felt quite sad watching it, which is the ultimate aim of the storyline, and that they thought the track went well with the story.