New filming dates

As my audience feedback has shown that the storyline hasn't been very clear to them as the majority confused Leah's illness with pregnancy, I have decided to re-shoot the scene where she finds out her diagnosis, I am going to change the location of this scene to make the diagnosis clearer to the audience by visiting the Oncology department at Castle Hill hospital in Cottingham. This location isn't too far from my college and will be easy for both me and Leah to reach. I plan to shoot the same scene as before but infront of the Oncology department sign instead so the diagnosis is completely obvious.

Another suggestion from my audience feedback questionnaires was to add a performance element as my video is purely narrative based. It is not often that there is a music video without the common convention of performance, both my target audience and media teacher feel that the video could be improved with this added. I am going to do this scene in the college theatre where I can use artificial lighting to aid me in creating the effect that I wish.

Here is the email I have sent asking for permission to use the theatre.

Therefore, I have communicated with both Leah and Jordan and agreed two dates.

Tuesday 18th March - Performance scene (I am still yet to be granted permission to use the theatre but this is the initial date me and Jordan have agreed on, a shooting schedule is yet to follow)

Friday 21st March - Hospital scene

Shooting Schedule

4.30-4.45 Pick Leah up from Beverley and travel to Castle Hill hospital.

5.00-5.30 Film the hospital scene