Second Draft

This is my second draft, I am still yet to make some final adjustments to my footage, particularly the editing at 1.28-1.50. I have also added a sound clip at the beginning in order to make the narrative of the story more clear. To see if this is successful I will carry out audience feedback and ask them especially if they understand the narrative of the video. Before uploading the video I also forgot to cut the very beginning of the sound clip where you can hear me speaking at the beginning, I shall fix this on my third draft. Furthermore, I shall also upload the final draft in a much higher quality setting.